I love this!

Better than any book I've ever read.

This... this is super cute! I really enjoyed reading it! Haha love Holden; he's quirky but awesome and I love his mannerisms and stuff. He and SKy are great for each other.

I loved it :) but I was annoyed to see you misuse irony :(

Cute! I've always been a fan of the catcher in the rye.

They both were co adorible that I myself almost fell in love with them. Not to mention I like Holdens standards ;D

Liked it, a very nice and cute read.

Love love love this! :) I'd love to see more with Holden and Sky. I'm gonna herp over to your profile now...

Such a cute story, I really love Holden & Sky :)

Some constructive critism if you want it. Otherwise just take the compliment 'cause I did really like the story.

If the premise of the story is "picky guy meets his dream girl only she's a he" you might want to emphasise that more all the way through. Other than eye colour and texting style we don't really find out how much of Holden's criteria.

Also Holden goes from concerned about Sky's gender to fine with little soul searching in between.

I'm now off to read 476 CE because it sounds interesting I really like your writing style.

Nkj k

Haha Omigosh thats just too funny! I cracked up at the end!

This was a very well written story and I really liked it. I hope, that if you have time, that you might continue this story. I would really love to read it.

Keep up the good work.

This was so cute! It's so hard now-a-days to find such well-written material. It seems that lately, nobody speaks proper English. Not only was yours spotless, your plot was sweet and eye-catching. I could have stood for a little more... :] In all honesty, the only really even semi-negative thing I've got to say is that in the scene where Holden and Sky profess their love, the ending seems a little rushed. But maybe their burning love for each other was just that epic. Everything just seemed a little quickly-paced.

Otherwise, GORGEOUS story!

I love this so much! It has so much potential to be continued, so please say you will consider writing a story of them in the future. ) I thought Holden would be the giver in their relationship because of his personality, but I was happily proven wrong. Though I so wished for a smex scene to end the story with, that ending was perfect nonetheless with a promise of things to come. It suits this one-shot in a way, cute but with hints of naughtiness. v

This story was adorable and enjoyable to read.