|Reviews for The Peace That Comes|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
I thought this was interesting, the idea of peace not being a good thing necessarily. It's not something I've read before and I think you did a good job with an unique concept especially with the last line.
I also liked the repetition of peace. You had it in the first line of each stanza, but in different phrases and word placements which made it less repetitive sounding.
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