What a sad ending. Great story.

I love this story! It's amazing! Please...keep writing!

This story was really good. The ending was so sad. ;_;

The only thing I would suggest is making more hints that Addie was sick. Like have her be weak, trip, or fall asleep in class more.

But this was a good story. :) Keep writing!

This was a brilliant story! I'm still crying. Nicholas and Addie remind me of the movie 'A walk to remember', but at least Landon is left with a baby. Great work.

Your style is awesome girl! But I think I should point out that people usually read humor stories for a laugh!

Give me your address. I am coming to kill you!

I loved Addie, she's a real character. Your plot is very interesting, too.

Overall, I really liked the story.

There was some awkwardness in the pace, like when he holds her on the swing but then suddenly it's Christmas and stuff.

I really like your unique voice in your writing. Addie has a very clear and authentic personality. Also, the bit where the letter is read and broken up with "- there goes the desk - who needs a lamp?," etc was a particularly good bit of writing.

I would really like to see this story after you give it a good edit and fill in the pacing a bit. Of course, it's fun as is, and you may be done with the story.

I hope you continue to enjoy writing, and improve and share!

Noooo! Last chapter! D:

You should have a special chapter! ;D LOL

ADDIEEEEE. DD:

YEH, GO NICHOLAS! KICK AIDEN AND FLIP MELISSA OFF! xD

AHHH, IT'S REALLY OVER. D:

Oh, and you're very welcome, I loved this story! :D Well, like minus the sad ending. LOL

Loved it! However, first story i've read on here, with a sad ending :(

Keep writing Ninja! ;)

did she have to die? it was so cute till she died.

geez... I'm crying like hell I've loved you're story from the very beginning. Most of the time I HATE story's with a (semi) sad ending. But in the end I LOVED this one. Really great job! (and because I'm hopeless with bad ending story's... could you please make an double end (*crosses fingers*))

You did an awesome job

Thank you for uploading

i know for a FACT that it WONT be a poop story, from what i have seen you are an amazing writer! i should probly just stick to poetry im better at it, but i never really leave it up because its about people and well, i tell sombody about it and they tell that person... so i delete it right before its read, or sombody reviews saying its too depressing... hahaha anyways. im really happy you wrote this story, i would say it changed my life, but thats really cheesy... but i mean its the truth, this story did change my life. so thanks

The ending is indeed rather rushed. but I did like it. Too bad there will be no more.

I just have to say that I absolutely love that last paragraph. It's beautiful.

And Addie is awesome and full of character-ness. Your writing is very good, it has a TON of voice in it.

I cried so much while this story! You made me lose so much salt and energy that I had to stumble to the kitchen... great story! I never read a book that has made me so depressed! It's sooooo sad. I can't even imagine the regret the mom must have been in... :(