|Reviews for Lies|
| Mourningstar13 chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Thank you for writing the perfect poem. You're the second poem I've found recently that are basically my thoughts, except for completed thoughts that happen to rhyme. Good job :)
| this wild abyss chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
I liked the narrator's emotion here because it wasn't obviously forced or fake and seemed to work for the subject being talking about. At times your phrasing and word choice were a bit odd, and I didn't like it because it distracted me from the piece and made things confusing.
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