Reviews for Fear
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
I was really confused in the beginning. You refer to yourself in the third person I'm assuming as Debbi, but I thought that was one of your friend's names. I was waiting to find out where Debbi was!

The piece was good. You described the situation well and it was funny throughout. I especially loved that last line. Hysterical.

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Rainbow35 chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
I love this, it's so funny! I love that Victor's way of getting her over her fear of heights was to take her bungee jumping, because that is just so random, and it just seems like such a stupid thing to do!

I also loved the way he tried to make her do it again, even though she must have been terrified; he seems like one of those funny people who's always joking and doing stupid things. :P

Anyway, great story, it made me laugh a lot! :D

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wardrobe-monster chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
:) I like it. It's a nice easy read and it is funny, aswell as cute. I never read this kind of genre but it was refreshing in a nice way. Thanks :)
Michael Kelso chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
I liked it. Very well crafted short story.