ok. I don't know what "hawking" is but I'm guessing that you mean she threatened to HOCK the ring.

verb (used with object)
1.
pawn.
noun
2.
the state of being deposited or held as security; pawn: She was forced to put her good jewelry in hock.
3.
the condition of owing; debt: After the loan was paid, he was finally out of hock.

unless of course you're a yankee and you're writing with an accent *shrugs*

this is an amazing story. You are a pretty amazing writer, all of you'r chapters are long, entertaing and detailed; i love it.

Okay, so I love your story but there are some minor errors, medically wise, well at least I think so I'm not an expert or anything my parents are both doctors so I kinda grew up with it.
For instane anemia and breathing aren't related I should know my sisters anaemic and I'm asthmatic, there are some other things but there all pretty minor, on fact I'm surprised most people who write doctor stories get it all completely wrong.
Anyway love your story

Okay, first of all, COMPLETELY illegal mikey srlsly dude.
Secondly great story

Awww! I LOVE THIS STORY! I would love to read a sequel with them. Where they deal with victor, get married, and have kids. ;) . Anyways thanks for sharing this awesome story with us!

- Danielle

Loved this chapter I do have a question where did you learn all the medical terminology because it gives the story so much more of a realistic feel. Until next time.

Much Love,

Sarah

A.k.a. blondiej1

P.s. you are an awesome author just thought I would say it again :-D

wow, holy crap what a chapter...jeez, my heart rate is still going, it was like reading a transcript of an episode of E.R. or something..amazing job! but i hope u dont leave us hanging too long! i need to know how they are!

Wow! Nice comeback! I'm loving these long chapters of yours. I love the details in the descriptions and your dialogue this time was superb. So, so romantic. *swoon* And mind you, I'm not usually romantic myself, but I really really liked what Andrew did for Amy. I'm miffed that Victor will not be in jail for longer than a night but I also want to see how Amy's mom is going to react to the situation. I hope Andrew will not do anything too foolish once he gets that gun, but then again, I myself would be exactly like him if I ever was entangled in a situation like this. *sigh* Oh, well... I am confident that int he end Victor will get what he deserves and that the couple will be together. Did I say I'm not romantic? Yeah, scratch that. LOL You did a very good job with this chapter. Quite sensual chapter indeed! :)

P.S. I miss Michael. :(

omg loved this chapter so much! was definitely worth the long update wait! please write more, please! i friken love this couple and cant get enough! the lemon was superb and so full of love, passion, and emotion! loved it all!

Oh, my God! Poor Ames! There's nothing worse than the rejection of a parent. Her mom is seriously stupid to not believe her. Even if Amy was indeed a spoiled, silly brat badmouthing her date, she is supposed to be by her child's side, at least trying to calm poor Amy down and give her some time to explain herself. Jesus Christ! Is this woman so horny, pathetic and alone who is willing to avoid her kid's cry of agony and despair for some dude with a willing dick and suave personality? Pardon my French, I really don't mean to be so crude, but unfortunately, this happens in real life way too often. I've seen it myself and it's the ugliest, most tragic thing! I guess this chapter kinda struck a chord. :( I'm so mad right now, that I truly believe that some crimes like the ones Victor has commited can only be washed away with blood. Hope the SOB gets what's long coming for him.

love your story, its so intense! i cant wait for more!

It's hard for me to imagine a day without drama in Amy's life. She attracts it like no other, huh? I enjoyed her and Andrew's time together at the beach, they were so cute. I was surprised as well to see Jason with Tina, but I was more surprised to see the girls fighting like this. Amy made me feel weird in this chapter with this whole Jason being an evil alcoholic man who will make Tina suffer. Jason and Tina only know each other two days. They are all over each other. Amy doesn't like that. Is there any rule anywhere in the world stating that people should get intimate after a certain time and not right away? And Jason is an alcoholic, yes. Does he have to inform anyone he meets up with in the first 5 mins of their meeting? I'm not saying Jason is a saint... but Amy really pisses me off in this chapter. She did start the fight and to tell you the truth, had I been Tina I would have done worse things to her.

She was right to warn her friend, but she was wrong to force her opinion on her like that. I hope against hope Jason gets help and gets better so he can prove them wrong and be with Tina in peace. If not, then I suppose all this fighting went on for nothing and all my support to him was in vain. *sigh*

*sigh* Boys will be boys, I guess. Although, I can't blame Andrew. I think I would consider the same thing. I hope Jason can get his shit together and go through his AA meetings successfully. I liked the part where you were describing Andrew's thoughts as he was shooting. Emma is possibly the coolest character in the story so far. I don't know, I like her much! lol I can't wait to see Amy's reaction to Andrew's black eye. I'm also worrying a bit cause I know Victor will do something tragic, won't he? Oh boy!

That was a nice chapter! I think I like Steve, but I realy don't know what to make of him yet. I mean, he can really be pushy, but then again, he could be protecting Amy when Andrew is not around... Amy's thinking is correct though... hmmm... I think I will have to think about it some more and decide about him later. As for Jason and Andrew's conversation, I liked it. It was funny and relaxing somehow. And for the record, yes Jason was rude BUT I still don't think he is to be blamed for Amy getting drunk. It was her fault! She's not a kid and definitely not THAT innocent when it comes to knowing about drinking alcohol etc. Pheww... I said it... again. lol You must hate me for sticking up with Jason on this. Anyway, it was a good chapter, I liked it a lot. :)

HUBBA HUBBA! *fans self*

Really? That was an excellent Christmas Eve chapter! Hahaha

The dynamics between Amy and Andrew are amazing! The sex part was very sensual and I feel sorry for poor Courtney who had to hear all that loving... I know I'd be jealous. LOL

And yes! I knew it! Michael IS dating Emma! Aww, they're good for each other. I can already see them conversing about how Emma is free on Mondays after her last surgery for a quickie, but Michael has to be at the ER at that time and they have to work their hours around etc. Hahahaha But perhaps they are the really romantic couple, taking their time to acquaint with each other etc. That would be lovely too. Anything that has to do with Michael, I like and I approve Emma!

It's funny, cause I expected Amy to have trouble accepting Michael and Emma and not Andrew. I guess I should have expected that as well. I'm wondering if he will tell Amy or not.

Keep going, it's a lovely story! :) Happy New Year!