Reviews for Against Medical Advice
Susan Holt chapter 21 . 12/17/2011
Wow! Drunk Amy annoys the hell out of me! Hahahaha

Sorry, I shouldn't be so bitchy towards the heroine of the story. she's cool most of the time. but let her stay away from alcohole throughout the rest of the story.

Andrew is definitely turning into a Michael, but then again, that is not a bad thing... at least not to me.

I love dthe scene at the hospital and the interaction between the two docs as they were trying to assist her. I'm a med nerd. I enjoy stuff like that. :)

I wonder now... just who is that mysterious person Michael is dating? Could it be Emma? Hmmm... thinking hard now... maybe you could fill us in ont he next chapter... cause I'm dying to know... I don't know really... Amy is in love with Andrew and they;re right together. However, she strikes me unsure the few times she's near Mike. Mayube it;s because they're ex-lovers? Hmmm... still thinking...

Okies, I'm gonna stop thinking now cause I smell rubber burning. LOL I loved both chapters! It was a treat for me going through a nasty bout of the flu. :( I wish I could have Michael to help me out... maybe Andrew too... okies, now I really have to stop thinking... Till next time! Have a nice holiday time! :)
Susan Holt chapter 20 . 12/16/2011
Okies, why do I feel like slapping Amy? I think she's one of those people who get irritating when drunk.

I know Jason was rude and asking the wrong questions, but Amy is responsible for herself and her state and not Jason. Andrew overreacted concerning Jason and Amy's situation at the beginning, but he did well by not rushing in kicking him out of the band. Now, if they have other personal or band problems between them, that's another thing.

No, I didn't like drunk Amy, but she was drunk... I can;t take her seriously. Part of me not liking her is the fact that she was unfair and bitchy to Michael, but Emma was smart and lady enough to put things in the correct perspective. In case I haven't said it much before, I like Michael. Hahahaha

And correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't Andrew starting reminding you of Michael? Just saying... I could be wrong.
mia aurora chapter 18 . 12/12/2011
ok i'm furiously mad right now.12 reviews ? .

I hope you keep writing for your reviewer and silent readers because i know you're a great writer :)
captainmoosen chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
i friken loved all the charmed references! this chapter was so descriptive in medical jargon! awesome!
Susan Holt chapter 19 . 11/10/2011
Andrew and Amy are very good together... although I DID miss Michael. :(

It was a nice and funny and hot chapter! The band guys are a hoot! I'm afraid Andrew will do the stupid thing both Amy and Emmy are afraid of... but I cannot really blame him... I'd probably do the same. Very nice and long chapter! :)
Susan Holt chapter 18 . 9/25/2011
Okies, first of all, your nickname does justice to your writing. You are a passionate writer. Like everyone else who has reviewed you, I'll say that it's a pity your work does not have more recognition.

Your story is very good with strong, solid characters and the pace is nice. I can see you have put great effort and love in writing it and the long chapters are always appreciated!

I haven't read the previous story to this one and I cannot really say a lot about Victor himself or Amy's relationship to Michael -who by the way, I dig a lot!

I was a bit annoyed with Amy in the beginning when she was refusing attention for her appendicitis. I gave kudos to Michael for actually being so saintly with her. As a medical field worker myself I've seen it before and maybe she has good reason for acting this way, but the fact remains that it's annoying. LOL

I was skeptical with Andrew's character in the beginning as well. Your later chapters won me over though.

Your dialogue is fast, witty, real and flowy. The sensual parts of the story are erotic and exciting.

Victor/ex-plastic surgeon/porn director (the last one had me laughing) sounds horrible, so I wouldn't mind if Andrew and/or Michael just kicked his ass badly!

Overall, you are doing a very good job with this story and I hope you keep writing. :)
CrazyInAGoodWay chapter 18 . 9/18/2011
I honestly hate that work of this quality doesn't get any recognition. I love this story. It is completely unbelievable to me that you only have 8 reviews! My reluctance to read came from your summary - maybe try and make it draw the reader in more? Anyways your writing is superb. Keep up the great work! Post more soon!
Dejirah chapter 11 . 9/5/2011
I noticed you only had seven reviews and it absolutely blew my mind. How can people NOT review your story? I have to say, Against Medical Advice is one of the best fiction romance stories I have ever read. You're writing is exquisite. The character development is wonderful, and the whole story makes me smile. I love the ups and downs of the story, how each chapter has it's own climax, and how you use writing techniques.

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful story. Keep writing it please; it makes my day!
selizabeth354 chapter 16 . 8/24/2011
I really like this story alot, I think that you have been doing a great job with it! It's very well written and you are really good at bringing your characters to life

I have to say, though, I think Michael is definitely my favorite character out of all of them :)

But seriously keep up the good work with this story!
MistressOfCats chapter 15 . 8/11/2011
Ok I understand why it would be a good idea to keep Andrew from killing Victor but I really want to beat this Steve's ass. And Amy is being a total jackass listening to him. The one who could help her the most is the one she is keeping away. She can't do this on her own, this Steve isn't enough. He doesn't really care about her, she doesn't really rely on him. If Victor were to attack her with him there, he could legally beat his ass bloody. Defense of a third party. With the record of abuse against Amy, Andrew could beat him to the point of catatonia and the law wouldn't bat an eyelash.
OhYikesCharlie chapter 11 . 6/13/2011
I actually squeaked when I saw your update :)

You didn't dissappoint. I want to know what happens next!

Will Amy keep her bruises hidden?

Be hard wearing the sluttiest outfit she has!

Update soon please :)
OhYikesCharlie chapter 10 . 6/3/2011
I really like this story!

I love hot stubborn Amy is :)

Update soon please :)
mia aurora chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
you write very well :)

update soon _
OhYikesCharlie chapter 8 . 4/27/2011
Hi! I like your story- it's really well written :D

And, just so you know, i'm a fan of Michael :)

Update soon please :3
Blonde.Ambitions chapter 3 . 3/19/2011
you're a great writer...i am really enjoying this story :) please update soon :)
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