Reviews for Never thought you were my friend
Itzmi chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
How sad...

I love the poem! I like how it rhymes...thank you for letting me read this kind of poem...although it might be a bit sad :)
this wild abyss chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
In general, I thought the flow of this piece was a little jarring and difficult to get into. I didn't like it because the poem read more like a list, which is fine in some cases, but here it just jolted around from thought to thought and never seemed to stay connected with anything previously mentioned.

I did like the narrator's honesty, even if the method of describing it was a bit cliched. I thought the portrayal of this character was fairly accurate/relatable, and overall it was a decent piece of writing.

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