|Reviews for The Spooky Ketchup|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
"You are,/You are."... I didn't get why you repeated that line.
"Squirts out lid,"... did you mean out of? Because out lid doesn't make sense.
Obviously not the best written piece, but I did enjoy it 'cause it was funny. And I know how that feels definitely. I also liked the :( after yuck it was cute.
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| THIS-IS-ALIee chapter 1 . 3/19/2011