Reviews for your poem sucks
Saigishin 13 chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
It would be an extra syllable depending how you read the word Poem... some read it as PO-EM, I read it as "POME" (phonetically).
Bloody Red Moon chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
The top line has one extra syllable, but other than that, a funny topic.
Archia chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
That would be mean to say to someone, but it is funny. I think that if I got a review like this I would laugh rather than be offended. But that's just me. Good thing it's in a haiku. I enjoyed reading this.
lookingwest chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
From the Review Game's Review Marathon (link on my profile)

I liked the humor of this because I think it's relatable and something everyone on Fictionpress and even in RL when critiquing fiction feels. I think you also did a good job with the mechanics of the haiku and keeping that rhyme and rhythm going, so I also liked it because you could adhere to the form well and keep it unique by writing it as a haiku. Enjoyed this, definitely made me laugh!