Reviews for She Dances
Archia chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
I love the deep meaning behind this. There was just one thing I noticed, "The world breathes around her." was both at the end of the 4th and 5th stanza. Because none of the others are repeated it looks a bit odd the second time. So, great poem, I love what happens in this and how the girl is made to seem so complicated, in a brilliant way.
BreakfastMuncher chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Aww, that is so cute, adorable, and unbeleivably amazing! I do love your work, Jeremy! 3

:D I do envy you.

Love, your best friend in Business Tech & Chemistry, but forever besties in the long run of life! 3 :)