Reviews for The Darkness
Compton chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Ok, this is your choice, but next time, I would separate the chapters into actual chapters, not all just one page. I makes it easier for a lot of people.

Also, always spell out numbers, that is really important.

Other than that, nice description which I like because it helps me really see your story like a movie. Good work!

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