|Reviews for The loser|
| Williamchan87 chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
oh finally you written a new poem. :)
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
In the first stanza those two lines seems kinda wordy and repetitive. They could almost be just one line. Also in the third line I think a comma after surprise 'cause those are two separate phrases.
I like the message in this piece. It's really true especially the idea of some people choosing bad ways and others just being stuck with them. The uplifting ending was great too. Nice job.
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