Reviews for Lidwy
unknown chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
Please update:)
OMG chapter 10 . 10/16/2013
TavaresX chapter 10 . 6/29/2013
I know you haven't updated in long, but please do! I'm really interested in this story and really want to know how Arthor reacts, and what happens. Please update!
sugarplum888 chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
Please, please, please update soon!
Guest chapter 10 . 10/29/2012
I'd like to inquire as to whether or not you have a 'beta?' Someone who proof reads your work. As English doesn't seem to be your home language, I would like to strongly urge you to do so. It isn't that I don't like your work, I just believe that it would make a 'great' writer and not just a 'good' one. Hope this is helpful and not hurtful. It was intended to be constructive critcism and not blatantly rude comments.

These little mistakes interupt the flow of the story and at times can make it difficult to read.
mylittleprincess chapter 10 . 9/17/2012
please update soon.
AnonymousReads chapter 10 . 8/15/2012
I wish you would update soon its been months
Mazarine chapter 10 . 4/9/2012
hello! I really enjoyed your story but I was sad to realize it has been two months scinc your last update I really hope you continue and I very much liked your other I want to belong story As well :)
leavesfallingup chapter 10 . 2/21/2012
Thanks for updating! I was hooked on this story and then it faded away. Your previous chapter grabbed me again and made he hungry for more.

If I were to offer any criticism, it would be that Robert was so mewling and cowed in the presence of a royal that it didn't make sense for him to come out as strong as he did in the end. Then again, I would have voted for a beheading and that would have settled matters quite nicely... alas, even fiction is constricted by those pesky issues of due process...

I look forward to your next update.
blank chapter 9 . 10/24/2011
keep writing
SatiricalEntity chapter 9 . 10/22/2011
please update!
leavesfallingup chapter 9 . 10/15/2011
Good. I was afraid that the description of the man's attitude and mannerisms boded ill. I'm glad that Christian got to her in time. Now I sincerely hope that the prince deals severely with son and mother.

Please write the next chapter soon?
leavesfallingup chapter 8 . 10/15/2011
If Artor is the younger brother, then why is it that he completely disregards the commands of his older brothers. Prince or not, the boy should be horsewhipped. Men who cannot control their own tempers have no business running countries.
leavesfallingup chapter 6 . 10/15/2011
I like Lidwy more and more. Will you be explaining the selection system? Are some of the girls eliminated from consideration every three days, or is there another type of schedule?

Another correction: You wrote "They are worth to be given a change" The correct word would be "chance." Actually, the same mistake occurs two paragraphs further.
leavesfallingup chapter 5 . 10/15/2011
I'm confused. Your summary inplies that all three princes are chasing after Lidwy. Why would Maurits do so when he already has a young lady with whom he has a deep attachment?
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