|Reviews for A sad little poem|
| Vicenzo chapter 1 . 1/31
I really liked this Poem. Could really be read at a funeral, it is Beautiful. I like the style - the way it flows- adds to the intensity of the content. Great, sad too
| SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
First of all, I'd change the formatting - the underlining put me off a bit, as it's hard to read, which is a shame because it's a good poem!
I really like the way you use language - I loved the lines: "Undeserving of her cold" and "The little spark of hope". You achieve a very sad tone to this poem very well :)