Shaking not shacking.

Poor Gabe, he is so flustered and Seth misinterpreted his nervousness for possibly disgust or rudeness. What a great first impression. XD I like your characters and how the story is so far going.

I enjoyed reading this story.
It was very sweet :)

I enjoyed this portrayal of youthful infatuation. The bonus parts didn’t interest me that much, though.

Seth is definitely a sex kitten XD Gzbe is so lucky for having someone like him!

I like this story, it's cute and fluffy! You should write more story :)

:D I really dont care that this was posted years ago...but just so you know that your legacy's still going...

your story is great

Refreshing that the roles are not set in stone . . . I like these guys a lot.

A bit too cutesy for my taste, but I suppose it was good. Didn't much care for the time skip but its your story.

Are you sure this is over? Cause now I feel like there's another one coming or you got a new story you are waiting to just introduce haha

You. Are. Awesome! I loved this story way to much!

OH MY GOSH I LOVE YOU!

*sniffles* SO ADORABLE.

You spelt 'shaking' like 'shacking.'

But it's still good :D

So never mind, your tenses are perfect here!

I'm totally captivated :D

Only one mistake!

Your tenses... you go from present tense to past tense:

" I couldn't even hear the sound of sticks breaking when I stepped on them. Damn I need to go to the gym or something."

couldn't and stepped past

need present

"I can't even hear the sound of sticks breaking as I step on them." This is what it should be. There are a few other spots, too!

But it's interesting and there aren't any spelling mistakes, or grammar mistakes besides the one above. Onto the next chapter!