Reviews for Belle of the Masquerade
StoryMonster chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
Very good idea!

You seem to have a penchant for unusual writing, and this one was very interesting.

I liked the beginning, and I thought that you introduced it very well, about her love for masks.

But later on, the part where she stopped wearing masks and stuff? Kinda unclear You could have described it a bit more, so as to explain.

You could have framed the questions (why, how, etc.) differently, it was becoming redundant.

But great try, and very interesting.:)


PS. Could you please repay this via Yours Truly an Indian Pessimist? Thanks!
Michael Kelso chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
I was drawn in but wasn't sure where you were going with this. I liked the masks. You described them very well. The image of vanity came across good. All in all, a very good short story. Well done.
Fedorachild chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
I really liked this. We all wear masks, and it's like that quote:

"We all wear masks, and the time comes when we cannot remove them without removing some of our own skin."

But yeah. Well done, I liked a lot of the language you used :)
knownkonvict chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
beautiful. i loved how you contrasted the two seperate masks and overall explained what they symbolized