Reviews for Darkness
Zireael07 chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Brilliant piece of writing! I love it!
StarScarlet76 chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
This is really good and shows the mindset of your character well. I also like how the whole view is detached to a certain extent. You have timing and pace in your writing especially the last few lines with only a word or two, it speeds up your reading and reminds me of a heartbeat.

Keep it up!