This is very good, I like the way you write! You should update :)

I'm sure Vivian wishes Damyen could sleep too, so she wouldn't be so annoyed, lol. Anyways great chapter and update soon!

Aw poor Vivian and her family. But i kind of feel bad for Damyen too,(kind of). Anyways don't worry about it ur not a bad writer. Ur doing great :)

Please continue! This story looks like it will be good :)

This sounds promising _ !