Reviews for don't wake me
classic violet chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
I love this. Every line is beautifully written. I love the last stanza especially. and 'i feel safe in my thoughts', I completely relate to that. The diction is gorgeous. Brilliant poem.
cab fed hig chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
"not even the hope

that I'm dreaming" repressive reveries of self discovery. it's so intriguing
Poisoned Twinkles chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
I love the enjambment you used with the last line of each verse as you connected it to the next verse. I could relate to this poem, too, and it is quite lovely with the words you used to describe the so-called 'hibernation'.

Yours,

PT.