Reviews for Absolute
SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
Brilliant use of language here! I especially loved the line:s "I was a fragile bomb;/ Covered in porcelain casing and about to destroy everything." I felt that swearing halfway through was a little unneccesary as the wording was already bold, but that's just a little nitpick :) The rhythm was great and the piece flowed well too - very good job!