|Reviews for The Railway Queen|
| Melusine Stafford chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
This is a good intro to a story. By the way, how does a nun scratch her head without messing up her wimple head-thingie?Sure, a few cliches, but what story DOESN'T have those? Update soon, please!
| a99515 chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
It's way to soon to tell but you have gotten my attion on this story. well thought out and written.
| Evilives chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
I'll be honest, I'm more into poems, but this sounds intersting. MORE!
| Who Is This Girl Anyway chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
This is an interesting beginning to the story. The only thing I noticed is that some of the description is a little cliched. Perhaps "sky blue" could be "blue as tanzanite"?
Anyway, best of luck with the story. I look forward to seeing how it plays out. :)