Reviews for Ash
wolfsmouth chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
Tsk, tsk, tsk *shakes head*

Why didn't you tell me? I'm very disappointed in you. :\

On the other hand, I'm proud as hell. Because this. is. amazing.

I LOVE it! :DD

Now it's my turn. What inspired you to write this?


-MC x
Affa chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
WOw! I didnt know your such a big girl! you know these big words! well done...i look forward top next chapter...
SumSumNiles chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Wow, your story was great. It really had that mystery-sense in it... We're the same, I'm just new like you.

Are you planning the creature to reveal itself sooner? If you would, that would be AWESOME. I love monsters popping out from nowhere! Well, this was a great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

-SumSumNiles(a new writer...)