|Reviews for Heartbeat|
| lowshie chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
i really really like this. very cute, pretty and well written :)
| Iva Hartnet chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Wow. That was beautiful. I interpreted it as though you were talking about a mother and her child...
And the poem had a very soft gentle feel to it that I liked.
Loved the lines, 'And our hearts complying to the newfound fact that they could never part.'
Moving and emotional as always. Genius :)
| Eleantris chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
This was simply gorgeous; I loved it. You've used some brilliant vocabulary and imagery here, it's a fantastic poem.
| Fantasy's Only Voice chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
wow! this is really beautiful! i can't wait to see more!
| singer22498 chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
I thought that the poem was very much feel of feeling even though it was short. Don't ask why but I can picture this haha.