Reviews for Heartbeat
lowshie chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
i really really like this. very cute, pretty and well written :)
Iva Hartnet chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Wow. That was beautiful. I interpreted it as though you were talking about a mother and her child...

And the poem had a very soft gentle feel to it that I liked.

Loved the lines, 'And our hearts complying to the newfound fact that they could never part.'

Moving and emotional as always. Genius :)
Eleantris chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
This was simply gorgeous; I loved it. You've used some brilliant vocabulary and imagery here, it's a fantastic poem.

Fantasy's Only Voice chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
wow! this is really beautiful! i can't wait to see more!
singer22498 chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
I thought that the poem was very much feel of feeling even though it was short. Don't ask why but I can picture this haha.