Beautiful. Beautiful. Damn it's so beautiful. Especially when I re-read it after the last line! You're a genius!

i liked it. :)

your characters were very human, and thoughtfully done, although the girl in the first chapter was...eccentric. i think she really was a bit mad.

well done.

I don't think shes crazy, just living in a reality diffrent from our own.

when i read the the first word of every paragraph, my heart sunk... amazing job though!

I like these stories.

It seems that the girl in the first story really got her craziness from her family because they were the ones who told her all that, and she took it seriously. Obviously she needs help, but I don't think she's the one to blame.

And as for the second story, I don't think love has boundaries, and I personally love the way you wrote the sentence using the first words.

Anyways, continue! :)

Awh): that's so sad. But I liked it, though, especially the "secret" message. Continue!

Whoa... yes, that chick is definitely crazy... o.O but good story though!