|Reviews for Alone|
| vampireauthor chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
maybe a bit to short, this is kind of a describtion, mabe ad onto this for chapter one? This definintly sounds like a story for me, let me know when you ad on more, the sentence "There is place in the world where there is in this universe where a battle takes place." doesn't flow very well mabe try "There is a place in the world, in this universe, where a battle takes place."
| nexuswarrior chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
Can you believe it! After sooooo long i finally signed in!
Anyho, thanks for the message - it reassured me you hadn't forgotten your lonely friend D but it also made me see this!
Awesome start _
ever need someone to rant about it too you know who you can talk too
really looking forward to the rest _
Anyway, got to go.
talk you soon inshallah
| anisha chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
A very interesting start wheres the rest of it i IT!
| Goodlife16 chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
Sounds like the beginning of a great story! You should definitely write some more.
| The lone canine chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Very interesting, this sounds like it would be a great story to read. You should continue.
Keep writing! :)
| katiegirl101199 chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
This sounds really interesting! Are you going to make a story of it? Because you should. ;)
This is a wonderful start, great writing!