|Reviews for True Or Real|
| Maddie chapter 5 . 6/26/2012
LOVE BUTTON! Ah! I love it! keep updating! This is really super good!
Loves from Maddie :)
| Brightheart chapter 5 . 9/16/2011
good chapter. love spying and mystery.
| Pan's Grandaughter chapter 5 . 9/6/2011
I'm re-reading the chapter as I'm writing this, so incase I say something that makes no sense, it technically isn't my fault... But ok, here I go.
As usual, I did not see any typos/grammar errors/grammer issues but my dyslexic self tends not to pick up on these things, and since I believe you have a beta, you should be good.
A few things that made very little sense to me: First, umm... "Then why did I see Braiden skipping down..." Skipping doesn't seem too natural for someone like him, even if he is extremely happy. It just doesn't seem right.
Another thing, how much do you know about this C.I.A. agent stuff? Even though my speciality is the F.B.I. and M-I5, there were acouple flaws in some parts of thier plan, with the dead drops, brush passes, bona fides, and rendezvous. Oh, and your jewler unsub did not seem too shady enough. If you want me to go into detail with this, just message me!
Brilliant chapter and I can't wait until the next!
| MITCHIESHANELUVR124 chapter 5 . 9/4/2011
nice! keep going! :D
| Lady of romance world88 chapter 4 . 7/21/2011
Hi. It's very beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am so surprise that Braiden slip the note into Heather when they passed each other to walk out of Mr Chow's class. Thats so cute :) I am wonder how old are Derek and his friends? This story have remind me of the game thats call, 'Final Fantasy VIII'. I am wonder if you knew that game? Aww Heather and Nicola spend time at lunch together without Braiden. Poor Heather. :( I am wonder what does Braiden want to talk with Heather about? Ah Braiden ask Heather to help him to solve the problem that he has. I am wonder why? Aww Braiden and Heather become item. How cute. :) I am hoping that Heather and Braiden will be together in the end. *hopeful smile* I am wonder why Professor Daniels want to have meeting with her agent people? Ah the black coal group already got the new leader. How interesting. :) I am wonder if Heather is plan to shot Dimitri after Heather and Braiden collect the information to Professor Daniels? Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it and Please update soon. :) I definitely will read this story until the end because I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH and I want to know what happen next in this story. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too soon. :)
| Lady of romance world88 chapter 3 . 7/19/2011
Hi. It's very beautiful chapter and I love it. :) OMG! Why does Heather ran away from Braiden? Is Heather afraid of love? I am wonder why Braiden suddenly show interest in Heather? I am glad that Nicole help Heather and stood up for her. Yay! :D OMG! More rumors about Heather and Braiden. Poor Heather. :( OMG! Braiden treat Heather like shit because he pretend thats nothing happen between them. How dare Braiden walk away from Heather and ignore her all evening at banquet. Poor Heather. :( OMG! Heather is late for class. Poor Heather. :( I am glad that Braiden and Heather have battle together. I am shock to see that Braiden hurt Heather very bad. I am wonder why? Poor Heather. :( It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it and I definitely will read the rest of this story tomorrow. :)
| Lady of romance world88 chapter 2 . 7/18/2011
Hi. It's very beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am wonder how old are Dylan and Nicole? OMG! Does Braiden have feeling for Heather? I am wonder why Braiden act so weird around Heather since the mission? I am wonder what's so special about the banquet? I am glad that Heather decide to go to the banquet. Yay! :) Aww Nicole have crush on James. How cute. :) I am wonder why the agents are not allow to date someone outside of the agency? I am glad that Nicole help Heather to look sexy tonight. :) I am wonder who's Kayla? Why is Dylan look for Kayla? Are they dating or something? OMG! Heather's dazzled by Braiden's beauty. *smirk* I am wonder why Braiden and Mr Matthews talk privately? Why are they so pleasing over something? It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it and I am definitely will read the rest of this story tomorrow. :) PS Check out this cool website and its call .com Hope that you'll enjoy read those stories there. :)
| Soonafter100 chapter 4 . 7/4/2011
Love it, please post again soon!
| Becca24221 chapter 4 . 7/3/2011
Love it D
| MITCHIESHANELUVR124 chapter 4 . 7/3/2011
nice! keep going!
| Lady of romance world88 chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Hi. It's so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am wonder how old are Alexi, Braiden Peters, Agent Matthews and Professor Daniels? *curiously* I am wonder how long does Agent Peters and Agent Matthews are working togegether as partners for? *curiously* I am wonder how long does Agent Matthews and Agent Peters work for Professor Daniel? *curiously* I am wonder why Agent Matthews's mission that she must kill Alexi? *curiously* I am wonder what Agent Peters is hiding from Professor Daniel? *curiously* Why is Agent Peters's frightened when Professor Daniel want to speak with Agent Matthews alone? *curiously* I am wonder if Alexi is dead or survive by shot? *curiously* Will Alexi plan to take revenge on Agent Matthews? *curiously* I am wonder how does Alexi's guards knew that its Agent Matthews who shot him? *curiously* I am wonder who's that man that Alexi talk with? *curiously* I am wonder who teach Agent Matthews the best shot in the world? *curiously* It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. I am taking break now and I'll read the rest of this story tomorrow. :)
| Contest-girl chapter 3 . 4/19/2011
So now I'm happy I kept on reading. I REALLY HOPE THEY GET TOGETHER ASAP OR I MIGHT FrEAk out!
| Contest-girl chapter 2 . 4/19/2011
NO00o0! WHY? Oh I am so sad! I was happy, then sad! WHY? NO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE SAY THAT DIDN'T HAPpEN! I'm so sad. I honestly started to CRY! I don't think I can read on... although I know I wilL... I. AM. JUST. SO. FREAKING. SAD!.!1.!
| Soonafter100 chapter 3 . 4/17/2011
I SO SO SO SO want every thing to work out for them and fo rthem to be together!
| Soonafter100 chapter 2 . 4/17/2011
I so want them together!