|Reviews for Talking|
| The Folk Extraction chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
I like the concept of this a lot. I like the vivid descriptions of the landscape mixed with the more subtle messages interlaced in between, it works really well. There's an overall feeling of desolation as I read it. Also, this has got to be the first work of poetry I've seen on here with a post apocalyptic theme! AWESOME!
| SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Great piece! Your use of language is very good, and you create such a clear image in the reader's head. I feel that it should be split up into stanzas and that some more punctuation in needed, but the wording is brilliant :)
As to continueing - if you write a similar poem in a similar style each time, it might get slightly repetative. If you use these ideas in a different way, that might work, but be carefull not to loose the magic! :)