Reviews for The Turnings
JoanLarkin chapter 11 . 9/9/2012
I love you and this story
reader1 chapter 7 . 6/24/2011
Loved the story. Very interesting. Please update soon! Thanks for writing.
Aobh chapter 7 . 6/19/2011
Quite nicely written :)

Your characters are nicely mapped out, though in places your story is hard to understand. This is because you switch from scene to scene without any indication of doing so. Using an star to separate paragraphs isn't a deadly faux pas ! It just helps the reader understand that we are no longer with Kat, but with Anya. Or Galen is no longer standing in the road, but throwing a body over a bridge :)

Other than that, I like your writing style, and the fact that me and kira share the same name does not sway me in the least ;)

update soon :)

-Kira :)
Carmel March chapter 6 . 6/15/2011
Lovely lovely lovely! Great job on this chapter :)
Carmel March chapter 5 . 6/5/2011
Really fantastic chapter - I loved it! And don't worry about not updating; this story is worth waiting around for :)

Carmel March chapter 4 . 5/27/2011
I'm officially a reader! Keep this going - I want to see where you take this! Great job so far :)