Reviews for Violin
earcandy chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
good comparisons!
singer22498 chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
I really liked what you have done hear, and how this poem is more of a scolding to the player of the violin.

I liked the words you used such as "tatters" and "wavering", they were very descriptive, giving me a clear picture of the poem in my mind, where I imagine a girl with her violin playing very carefully.

I didn't really like where you chose to pause and go to the next line, because it didn't seem like you needed pauses there sometimes. Also, you misspelled practice, you spelled it "practise".

Overall, I liked it!