Reviews for Explode
Loqwell chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
I think the ending of "angry/so angry" was rather powerful, leaving behind a sense of somewhat rumbling anger that works well with the imagery of an unwelcome explosion. It goes to show that we don't really need flowery wording to write a poem about human emotion; some times the simple words work better. That being said, I was more fond of the second set of three words than the first, and I believe it was because the very first line is so very long. In such a short poem though, I don't believe it really detracts from the poem all that much. Overall, I liked it. :)