I love your story! But what I mostly love is the kissing scenes. In a lot of cliches it takes forever for the two main love interests to end up I always end up thinking would they hurry up already. So thx for your story. Hope you update soon! :)

This is a cute story. I love her obliviousness :)

lol this is rlli funni "alfonso? wat kinda name is tht" lol tht killed me nyways plz update thx xoxo

I sah-wear, Sage is such a sweetie How could Hayden NOT like him ? LOLL !

Ohmahgosh, Sage sounds so cute No lie :)

nothing much happened.. but hey its still the beginning i'm sure they're many more interesting aweswome things to come! keep writing

:D

Loved it, hope to see another update soon!

makeover! wo that is always fun, can't wait to see both boy's reactions

I like shopping. xD But only when I'm 'in the mood', ya. Idk.

Anyway, loved the chapter and ZOMMG! GHOSAHGIOE\.f p[[;\9 I can't wait to see how this/she turns out. ;D

But I don't get why she keeps wanting to kiss him if she likes Flynn. Gaah, oh well. Is it just because he's a good kisser? lmao.

Great read! I love that song ;D

Aw, this is so adorable, I love Sage, lol. /sad sad sad

Loved the way you ended it, I have a thing for good endings, they make me realy like the story. And they make me want an update more. /hinthint

Keep it up!

I love when they kiss but then its always about Flynn...more kissing soon i hope

that was inetersing.. i have a feeling it'd be a cliche but hey it would be a good cliche )

Okay it was rlli gud nd u habv gud detail so keep it up xoxo )

WRITE MORE!(: haha i love it! :) its really good and it caught my attention! I would like to hear more:)