Reviews for Marshmallow Revolver
classic violet chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Interesting. I like the combination of tragedy with softness. The title itself is unique. Great job.
StoryMonster chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
Pretty interesting (and amusing) way of putting it. xD

I liked the concept, as I mentioned, and the only drawback I noticed was the all-small-letters thing.

If you had written it using correct punctuation and stuff, it'd have been perfect.

Nice one!


PS. Could you please return this via Your's Truly, an Indian Pessimist?