Reviews for I Was Made to Love You |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() Typo: Chapter: Seven Paragraph: Three Line: One Word: Two The word "as" should read "was" The sentence reads: I as lucky that the days and nights had begun to turn cool, so having a fire wasn't going to make me feel like I was being slowly baked and smothered. Sentence should read with typo corrected: I was lucky that the days and nights had begun to turn cool, so having a fire wasn't going to make me feel like I was being slowly baked and smothered. Sincerely, SRN 2013 "Surprise everyone!... Live long enough to write about it!" SRN 2013 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Typo: Chapter: Six Paragraph: Nine Line: Two Word: Nine The word "daren" should read "darken" The sentence reads: I saw his eyes daren and fixate on my fingers, as if he wanted to break them. Sentence should read with typo corrected: I saw his eyes darken and fixate on my fingers, as if he wanted to break them. Sincerely, SRN 2013 "Surprise everyone!... Live long enough to write about it!" SRN 2013 |
![]() ![]() Typo: Chapter Four Paragraph four Line six Word eight The word "and" should read "an" The sentence reads: He did and amazing job on the panel, it almost appeared to be real and I loved it. Sentence should read with typo corrected: He did an amazing job on the panel, it almost appeared to be real and I loved it. Sincerely, SRN "Surprise everyone!... Live long enough to write about it!" SRN 2013 |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have captured my interest with this story, I don't know why I haven't encountered it before. It has a little of everything. I, too, am curious as to who actually killed Aleck and why. The logistics of a ghostly relationship will be difficult. Then of course, there is the man named Joseph that Casey hopes Lil will agree to meet one day. There are so many different directions that this story could take. I look forward to following along. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just want you to know that I have stayed up wwwaaayyy past my bedtime to read your lovely story. Now off to bed at 3:30 A.M. :) Can't wait for an update and damn those distractions! I'm sure Casey will be fine with the baby. Technology has really advanced in the medical field now, from when I was born. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you will be updating soon! Really enjoyed your story so far!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it so far :] I hope you keep writing xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is just so lovely, i hope it has a happy ending! xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved the Chapter very much.. It was Great.. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.. Please Update Soon... :) |
![]() ![]() this is my favorite chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! :)) That dress sounds awesome. xD |
![]() ![]() awwwwwww. thats so sweet. her tears wiped away from someone in the after life in heaven of course. :) |
![]() ![]() uh oh. sounds like she doesn't like this guy nathan. can't wait to read what happends next. on to the next chapter :D |
![]() ![]() Waiting to find out what happens next. |
![]() ![]() awwwww. i've had those dreams before. i had two of them and thats all. one i woke up crying to and the other i just froze because it felt so real |