Reviews for Super Short Story
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
This is really great :-)
Ioga chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
I wandered in through getting an anon review from maybe you and wanted to return it somewhere! :)

It was a cool set-up, packed with plot-driving moves. For an angst piece, it had plenty of action to balance for the mental processing. I liked how we don't get any confirmation whatsoever from the guy's thoughts on whether he's a psycho murderer or if she's just crazy. Two-edged story!

Minot nitpick - I was wondering if in the name of symmetry, "beginning of tears" should be "beginnings of tears". But I'm not a native speaker.

Thanks for this!
Bloody Red Moon chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
Death! My favorite... Nice little thing you got here. Short, but demanding.

Niki Tori chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
That was amazing! So much built up in such a short read.

~Much Love and Many Hugs~

Niki T.