Reviews for Mud Bath
FlowersBite chapter 2 . 5/22/2014
aw what a cute couple
NaoEarthGoddess chapter 2 . 12/22/2012
marginal-utility chapter 2 . 8/26/2012
The love notes were so cute!
marginal-utility chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Cliche, but cute.
foreverandeverr chapter 2 . 11/17/2011
aww! How cute. :)
Anon et Nymous chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
- now Favorited- ;)
Stephlikeswriting chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Aw I really liked this. I could see them as such an odd sight- covered and mud and kissing. Very sweet :)
tarah chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
Hi, i'm glad you came back. I was sad when you left, so I hope things go better this time. I'll try my best to review unlike last time! This was really cute! I hope you write more fics soon!:D
foreverandeverr chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
x awe. It was so cute. :)
PharaohYuki chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
:) Great story ya got here! It's so well written and everything :D The characters are great, and even though I have no idea what Charlie looks like, I made my own version and imagined the whole story in my head... onom...

I can't see any spelling or grammar errors, and the story is great, but one thing I did notice is that the story is rated K. If it were my story, I would bump up the rating to a T, not because of the slash theme, but because of words like 'dick' and 'jackass'.

Anyway, that's just a suggestion! Great story! *faves*

NocturnalNoir chapter 1 . 3/29/2011

This was so freaking adorable. Yes, it's a little cliched, but I really don't actually care because of how well-written it is. I love their banter, and I love how even though Hunter keeps saying how ugly Charlie is, it's apparent that it's the whole "I'm going to pick on you because I like you" thing.

They definitely interact like two guys. I see in a lot of slash that one acts incredibly feminine so it's more like het than slash, and that annoys me. I don't see it here. The only criticism I have is that the kiss seems a little spontaneous. Maybe lead to it a little bit more? I don't want to nitpick at this too much though. It was really an enjoyable read.



P.S. If you have the time to check out either one of my stories, I would really appreciate it. )
authorLH chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
Awesome story! :D