Reviews for Downfall
uniquely-unique chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
You can feel the uncertainty in this poem.

How much they long to be the center of their beloved's world.

And yet always thinking that they might be hiding something.

That they will become dissatisfied.

Leave them.

Truly a downfall.

I loved it.

earcandy chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
haha! I feel you! Glad you wrote this and know we're not alone. This is feelings on poetry. Definitely.