Reviews for Apple Woes
kaymuhray chapter 1 . 7/19/2011




that totaly sucked for him

lol and for me because the strory is over

:( another sadface

but on the upside the ordinary girl doesnt get hurt by the popular hot guy right
Brown-Eyed Chocoholic chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
Damn! xD This story made me laugh. Burn...
Dreamerofthesky chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Oo I like. Aw she didn't like him back. :'( The writting was great. If you decide to write more to this story I'll be very happy :) and make sure to read it! Haha Great job!
strangledice chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
The ending was cute even if Apple rejected him again. lol.

Nice one-shot!
banana jump chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
that was really sweet in its way:)
classicallyclassic chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Oh dear. Poor, poor Jacob (and I'm definitely not saying that in a mocking way). But, it just goes to show that even guys can like girls who won't like them back. His musings were really funny. I really liked this piece. If anytime in future, you want to expand on it, I'll be the first in line to read it.
chewychester chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
I don't know what to say...she didn't like him, huh? Or do you think he should have told her he liked her because maybe she didn't think she had a chance with him? Or he seemed like the type to say he would ask and then he would go back and say he sad no, just to hurt her back. I'm so confused, but this was really good!
R. Tist chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Ah, how refreshing! Finally, unrequited love from a guy's point of view! :")) Loved this so much!