Reviews for Prayed for
Smileyface33 chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
I read the review you made of my poem so I thought I would check out some of your work. This is seriously a great poem. It has a little trouble when you repeated the word care, but the rhyming is rather good. The message of this poem is very awesome. Take my word, I think you should consider being a poet.
A Hopeless Romantic chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
I think this is really good. I don't think rhyming is always necessary. I like the flow and the message. Good job!
vampric-panda chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
i think its really good.
Ahrlaedrin chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
In this review

I'll prove to you

What you've proven to me

I don't suck, and neither do you

I will tell you now

With fail help

That you made a little mistake

It's not too deep to delve

Cease means to stop,

And the sentence was a contradiction

"And when that rain ceases to stop,

I'll create a little rainbow for you"

Should it not be

And when the rain begins to cease?

The ending part

Was beautiful indeed

It is so sad

That it was the end!

My mindset is unbent,

I will admit this now

I think the poem was lovely

And you should know

If I'm good at poems

Then you are too!