Reviews for Innocence |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well goodness. That was creepy. Nice job. I liked the way 'Logan's' eyes were flashing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this short. There were a couple of places where the flow was a little jerky, but all in all, very nice work. Keep Writing! |
![]() ![]() this ch was soo good... wow! i hope this is not a one short... i really want to read the next ch... |