Reviews for Moon Burning
Lazy Me chapter 22 . 8/16/2016
Loved this story... but I can't help but feel that the ending was very rushed. This final chapter in particular leaves us with no idea what happens regarding the still vengeful Douglas nor who or how Ceana was kidnapped. The rest of the story was great but the ending is a bit disappointing.
Taraxoxo chapter 23 . 9/13/2013
I loved this story
madz chapter 23 . 8/11/2013
loved it :)
Prodigee123 chapter 21 . 7/31/2013
Please update Glen's story!
Prodigee123 chapter 17 . 7/30/2013
really good
Prodigee123 chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
Sounds interesting.
ILuvBookz chapter 23 . 7/23/2013
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W0lfL0ver chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
I love this story! Such a wonderful pack and the characters were wonderful!
moonshower chapter 22 . 11/12/2011
This totally rocks!
Broken Cascade chapter 23 . 8/8/2011
This was a very interesting story. It worked with the fairly popular concept of a werewolf and his mate, but you really added your own perspective and made the story unique. I liked the historical setting. You have a very good writing style. Your use of dialect for your characters' dialogue really added to the story and you did an excellent job maintaining your characters' pattern of speech.

However, your story has a lot of technical errors. There are problems with spelling, sentence fragments, and shifts in point of view. They make the story harder to read and detract from your writing. You could really benefit from having a beta go through your work to correct your errors, which would help make your story easier and more enjoyable to read.
FamishedNight chapter 23 . 6/13/2011
SometimesG chapter 23 . 6/11/2011
Whew... this was a lovely story. Your grammar and spelling can stand improvement but the words, accent, historical background and plot are unique.

I am looking forward to your next story and hope you continue to write. You already have a group of readers and followers from this first story so making another spin off is a great idea.

I hope you don't go along the trite and well known plot of the mate and wolf thing in your next story. If you can inject drama and action, you can make the story of Glen an interesting one. Also, maybe include now and then just a mention of Ceana and Aoden?
farzana chapter 23 . 6/10/2011
amazing loved it :) cant wit for Glens story
Macy Pearson chapter 22 . 6/10/2011
I came into this story kind of late, so I pretty much read all the way through it. For one thing, I was very impressed at how you kept up the accent the whole way through! I would've gotten lazy/forgot, so I'm quite impressed, even if others might take it as a given.

Loved the characters, loved the plot. Certain scenes were just hilarious, and others were balanced with seriousness and love, so it played out well.

I'll be looking forward to Glen's story!
JBrooke chapter 23 . 6/9/2011
Yay! I'm glad Glen's next! :) so excited!
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