I like it. Great Imagery.

This is very true. Most people tend to get lost in themselves and forget those days of the sun and instead get lost in the haze making them lost and hopeless. I want to scream to most of them that there is a way out! Anyway, I really love your poem. I hope to read more of them in the future. Thanks for sharing. _

Nicely written. Very eloquent. I liked the language you used, very classical.