Reviews for Fate of a Wolf
IsntItFunny chapter 11 . 10/14/2017
I took a chance reading this story when it only had 11 chapters, despite the chapter amount telling that this story was most likely not complete and... I just found out for certain that this story is incomplete. I was so into the story, too!
eenitsedStarzz chapter 11 . 11/18/2014
Please continue! You've done a great job so far. I can see it's been a few years but I would love to read more.
shaylee chapter 11 . 7/23/2014
Arent you ever gg to continue this story? Such a shame since it was getting to be interesting
hitokori midnight chapter 11 . 5/14/2014
Alaeryel chapter 8 . 11/30/2013
LOL-I LOVED IT! What a way for Becca to be introduced into what Silas is! WHAT AN AMAZING JOB YOU DO WITH WRITING-this had me giggling at the end part-BRILLIANT!
Alaeryel chapter 7 . 11/30/2013
Well this was action packed and adorable-I loved it that Lorelei hugged him-the innocence and trust of youth! I was not expecting the cougar to be in her place-my first thought was that Marcus had done something-definitely caught me off guard! You can swap mountain lion, cougar and big cat through the story to switch things up and so you don't over use one word all the time and gives different flavor-just a suggestion! I also think you are doing an outstanding job with Silas' pov so keep doing what you are doing!
Alaeryel chapter 6 . 11/30/2013
I LOVED this chapter! It made me smile clear thru it and it really makes me wish there were more to read-atleast I have 5/6 more chapters to go-AMAZING WRITING!
Alaeryel chapter 5 . 11/30/2013
Well Silas found out that Lorelei isn't Becca's and now I wonder what may be running thru his mind! I am definitely really enjoying this story and wishing that you hadn't stopped writing it. You have the talent to go far with writing anything and I am in love with this one.
Alaeryel chapter 4 . 11/30/2013
It was enchanting-I was wondering if her brother and wife would have had a child or the 'responsibilities' would have been something else and I love what you are doing with the story thus far you are doing a magnificent a job with it!
Alaeryel chapter 3 . 11/29/2013
This chapter had me grinning like the Cheshire Cat! I like the idea of those two together-made for one another!
Alaeryel chapter 2 . 11/29/2013
Well I can now see it has been a couple years since this was updated so you may not get or respond to this review BUT I am leaving one anyway! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story and the writing is really good and extremely enjoyable!
Alaeryel chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
I love the concept of your story and your writing is really good. I didn't spot too much within this chapter and it has definitely caught my attention-it is a bit unique compared to other werewolf stories and it intrigues me.

The only thing I would point out and not exactly a criticism but the first part of the story rambles a bit, you repeat yourself a few times but that is nothing major outside of that I think you are doing very well with your story and I definitely am looking forward to following it clear through!
Cookie Dough chapter 4 . 9/12/2013
Very interesting..
secretly waiting chapter 11 . 7/9/2013
Great story except like most stories, its left hanging there
FantasyisBetterthanReality chapter 11 . 5/30/2013
update soon!
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