| Reviews for Fate of a Wolf |
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   Lady Veterinarian chapter 11 . 8/6/2011 I really like your pacing of this story, and I do like that Becca is not like most of the female protagonists that do go la-la over the male werewolf. It makes the story and characters much more relate-able. I'm seriously looking forward to seeing if/what compromise Becca and Silas come to. |
| I'm a loner Dottie a rebel chapter 11 . 8/6/2011 I had so much fun reading this! I love the characters you created. Looking forward to more! |
| Panda12 chapter 11 . 8/6/2011 I really love your story. It's great getting it from both POV. Also I love Becca and the way she's standing up for herself a bit. It makes her seem like a more real person. Can't wait to read more. |
| goldenfeather chapter 11 . 8/6/2011 Really liking the story so far. It was progressing really nicely in the beginning but then got a little bit slow but as I've read your ANs you've noticed that too so it'll be fixed in no time I'm sure (: anywaaaays, update soon because me and the rest of us Faters-of-a-Wolfers can't wait for another chapter. Plus, that would mean we would be closer to the bow chicka wow wow, if you know what i mean (; HAHAHA! |
| KayleneH chapter 11 . 8/5/2011 Good chapter! Cant wait for more |
| StaNdUPtomE chapter 7 . 8/5/2011 Think manly thoughts and it will sound guyish... |
| StaNdUPtomE chapter 4 . 8/5/2011 Becca's POV, was great in this chapter... how do you pronounce silas |
| StaNdUPtomE chapter 3 . 8/5/2011 I like it, the plot so far is good, I thought the way they met was cute, but you asked or constructive critisim, so here it is, Your chapters are short, and in reality the first three chapters could be one chapter, or even two chapters (if you wanted to split silias and becca's POV's.) The other thing, (because somewhere I saw something about wanting longer chapters) is a little more detail, Some people are detail hords and others don't have enough (i'm in the latter category) but it needs a little more, and not detail from their pov, but general detail, like it was cloudy out, or the street was quiet as the sun set kind of detail, to give more of a setting, adn also break up the dialouge... Your detail ability was good with the whole Marcus incident, in Silas POV, how his friends has a 'quiet conversation' but a little more detail... however I like it :D and I hope my constructive critisim helped! |
| violet-eyez chapter 11 . 8/5/2011 lol can't wait for and update |
| Smartgirl94 chapter 11 . 8/5/2011 Wow, this is really getting good. Please update soon :D |
| CrazyCowgirl101 chapter 11 . 8/5/2011 More please! |
| ravenhowards chapter 11 . 8/5/2011 I'm so happy you updated! I now understand Becca's mindset and it makes sense. Update soon |
| sally n chapter 11 . 8/5/2011 its good to see ur back..lol i know its mean but i kinda liked her jumping out the window it was great. |
| reginakttykt chapter 10 . 7/27/2011 I just found this story and I really like it. Please update soon. |
| The Weatherwitch chapter 10 . 6/24/2011 THISISSOAWESOME! i love it! please please please update soon! |