Reviews for How Unfortunate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The beauty of this site is you can come back to stories, even years after starting them. I would love to see more of this story whenever you find the spark again.:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good test. I think introducing Katie to the story is good. Eleanor's life is coming full circle. With Katie in the picture perhaps some of the demons from her teen years can be laid to rest or she can come to terms with. Looks like I saw a spark between Dan and Katie too, hmmm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is perfect. Sylvia might need her own spin-off though. She is certifiable lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Guilty as charge. Caught me off guard in a good way. Broke away from a possible cliche moment into something serious and somber, but not in a tacky way. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sylvia is so delusional. Like laugh out loud crazy delusional. Poor Theo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I have my dignity, so I won't act like a twelve year old girl, but I am darn happy they finally kissed! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm doing a mental fist pump. Go get your woman, Theo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really loving this story. On to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this. : Please un-hiatus it soon. I would love you forever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! This was the first story that I've read on here, please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww! Everything is slowly falling into place and becoming right :D I'm really liking it so far :) I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Long time no read! Don't be too hard on yourself! It was okay, meaning a step in the right direction. The story slowed down a bit but I feel as if you are starting it up again. :) Please continue writing! I miss this story! Eleanor's crazy remarks are hilarious! Her remarks make the story shine! Hope to hear from you soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! I feel so bad for Katie, oh my god. That is so sad. Like, she was really, really mean, but I just feel terrible for her. Also, DAN BETTER BE OKAY. HE BETTER BEEEEE. Or I will have an even bigger meltdown than I did with the flashback with Bryan's death, haha. Hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bawled like a baby during that flashback. Still not entirely over it. IT IS JUST SO SAD, OMG. Theo's dad is just such a dick and Bryan was basically his dad, and he died, and he had no one to play baseball with so he was just rolling it around OH MY GOD I NEED ANOTHER BOX OF TISSUES |