Reviews for The Star
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
I love the imagery in this. Any kind of nautical or beach imagery is one of my favorite types to work with, probably because of how mystical it seems. I love "quicksilver seahorses" and the last line especially. The first line doesn't really seem to fit in with the oceanic imagery of the rest of it, but I do love the "birds singing to your shoulder blades" part. Very nice. Keep writing! :)
LivesTooShort52 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Wow. That was so vivid. It's amazing!

I see you didn't put this under poetry, are you considering making it into a book?

I'd be curious to see where it goes if you do!

Please check out my book, Rules of Walking the Line?
cab fed hig chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
beautiful and otherworldly