Reviews for On Love
Radness 2.0 chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Please do continue
CityBlackOut chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
. . . You write well but this sounds unreasonably like love and theft. The whole new boy transfering, annoying, blonde, kindaselfobsessed bitch, the fiery main character, and the guy best friend? The janitors a nice touch but you've just got me expecting the same as last time. ); although i will be waiting to see if you come up with something distinctively different. :)
ExampleOfAWriter chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
Go on... I seriously am drown to your work! it is awesome! I love how violent she is.
PeopleHelpThePeople chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Ha ha kinda funny lol
bonnie1md chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
hey sounds good. are you going to explain what they look like? how old they are? that would be great if you do. cant wait for more
I-am-happy chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Oh! This looks cute and really good so far! Can't wait to read more... soon (?) I hope!
StoryMonster chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
It's a pretty good start, but it's kinda disconnected - I mean, who is Corey, Tiara and Ryan? Why are they stuck there, and where are they in the first place?

It;s a bit confusing, but I liked the slight humor of the situation, and there were no grammar or spelling mistakes as far as I know.

Hope you continue, and keep writing!

StoryMonster
The First Winter Snow chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Really cool, I like it! Definitely keep it up! :-)
Fireheart101 chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
good story... so far, keep on writing I'll be reading!