|Reviews for Singed Blue Fireflies|
| simba chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
i think island's rules makes more sense than Island rules, but still, so beautiful. intense symbolism makes this read delicately but it still goes down densely, honey-like.
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
I like the strong, gritty tone in this (the second stanza reminds me a bit of Plath.) There are a few little spelling errors here and there e.g. conflagration, but the phrasing is very lovely "put upon moon". I would suggest changing "Island's rules" to "island rules" it reads more smoothly.