Reviews for A Flash of Metal, Then Darkness
Reel Wander chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
Interesting beginning for a story. I like it so far. Continue to write, you got talent.
slave to the voices chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Very nice beginning! Your descriptions are incredible and your imagery was awesome. I actually had a flashback of the grueling trudges to school. Great job, keep writing.
Melusine Stafford chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
This is a very nice start to a story that can be very, very good. It's descriptive, and beliveable despite the 'fantasy' label.
JaffaFoose chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Pretty interesting, I guess. The ending was, at least. Up until the end it was a little too ordinary. Well written, for sure, and very believable and realistic. Just, nothing to really grab my attention.

Still, the last sentences provided some intrigue about what is to come. And even if it weren't for the ending, I have to compliment you on your realistic characterization thus far, and on your solid writing. :) Nice job!