Reviews for Saving from Monkeys
SparklingA chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
:D This is so great! It was a wonderfully hooking first chapter. I already love Elliot (bad me) and O.M. , WHAT was that piece of paper? *rakes brain* Did Grandma die? That's all I can think of...

I'm glad to have a new story from you to follow :)



P.S.: I feel like this is a frightfully short review...
ObliviousLady chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
You've certainly caught my attention. I look forward to more!
alex tbeautyoi chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Loved it. Can't wait to read more and to find out what Elliot is hiding
Sunsetshadow19 chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Interesting. I am more than just a little intrigued and you've only got the one chapter. There's so much that could have happened and I can't wait for the next chapter. I like how you really give a lot of details about their drunk states, but her slamming the car door when she gets out doesn't seem like something she'd do if she were that hung over so that her hair hurt. Sorry, I try to give constructive criticism but that was the only thing I could think of to criticize. The story is off to a funny, tense, awesome start. I look forward to reading on.
xxjoceyuxx chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
a new story! i'm so excited to see where this one goes, right off the bat there's a bit of mystery. We get a bit of insight into both the main characters and their relationship which was amusing. All in all i'm super excited that you're writing another story!
Kristyanna chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Sounds amazing so far. Can't wait for more.
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